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Great game, just curious as to if your considering putting some kinks into some routes at all?

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So, I made a D&D Character Inspired by Rune! (Cervan Bard, College of Valour for anyone wondering) and wanted to ask what his last name was since I literally can't find it anywhere TvT

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Is there a good route for Torulf?

yes

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Now give me Arvo singing "I'm not your toy" to Torulf and my life will be fulfilled.

Love the vn btw

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This vn changed me.

I know I shouldn't have but I started it when I was 17 and from then I've always come back for the updates. Ive gone through a hell of a lot since I started it. Now, at almost 20 it is obvious it has had a lasting effect on me. It made me change how I saw and imagined falling for someone. It made me contact my old best friend from school and apologise for leaving him behind and joining everyone in calling him a fag for being flamboyant (ironic now since I'm out as bi). It made me reconsider how I saw some of the people around me and even made me think FAR more about my near future than anything else has, specifically college. I owe so much of my personal change in the last few years to this *fucking visual novel* that I'm embarrassed to admit it.

Thank you to dawn chorus and it's developers for helping me outgrow childish beliefs and making me think deeply about myself. I will, for as long as it gets updates, return to this vn and read and re-read the stories within it.

Ive even been thinking of getting a small tattoo of "Dawn chorus" because of all of this.

Btw forever more will I be interested in people like Jørgen because of Dawn Chorus

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After playing Lake, Devon, Rune, Jorgen, and Bjorn's route. I think I'm going to cry if I can even finish this visual novel and do every route except Torulf's. AMAZING.

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Me watching Arvo in Dogtooth routeCreate meme "walter white screaming in car, Walter white , breaking bad ...

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Literallyyy

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I am legit tearing up at the mikko story I need it to be finished. 

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Not sure if this is for everyone, but every new update the skip button doesn't remember what I have/haven't read, worried im missing stuff when i do skip.

Lmk if this is just me or not!

Having the same issue

Hiii dear developer!👋

First of all, I'm not a spam mailing list or anything like that😐 ahem...

 We are a team of ExGames translators. We would like to ask permission to translate your vn's from the original language into russian. A lot of people liked your novel, but due to the language barrier they cannot read it in the original. Our team is translating various furry novels into Russian, and in order for people to be able to touch your work, we are asking for your permission to translate. There are a large number of short stories in the list of translations we have, and we would like your short story to join it.

 Our translators receive a nominal payment for translation, since the project is supported by donations from Russian-speaking readers. For translation, we use only publicly available versions of novels and, after translation is completed, we post them on a platform similar to Patreon for a period of 1-2 weeks for those who want to get earlier access to the translation. Subsequently, the translation becomes publicly available and any user can download it for free.

 For each publication, we always add a link to the page with the novel, and if necessary, we can insert links to your social networks.

 We are also ready to provide all the necessary translation files for their implementation in the official assembly, if you are interested in expanding the number of available languages for reading.

 We really hope for a positive decision, as we want to further develop the Russian-speaking furry community.

 Thanks for your time! Best regards, ExGames Translation Team❤️❤️

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Just wanted to show love for the bjorn route because i hadnt seen anyone here talking abt it. this is the sweetest boy in the whole world i adore him

Is "Perfume Prodigy" a play on the singer perfume genius?

Crying because of the rune route I will wait for next update

Releasing it on Patreon this week!

Definitely I'll be waiting

Is Mikko's route already finished? And is there any way to get an ending where Arvon confesses to him?

The route isn't finished yet! All the routes are getting a "to be continued..." at the end of the current content in the next update 😔

I understand, including a great game, it made me have a carousel of emotions for a few hours

Hey there! First off, I just want to say I’m really enjoying Dawn Chorus—it’s beautifully written and the emotions really hit home for me.

I came across a small inconsistency during Devon's route, day 2. Arvo has a line that states he has drank some alcohol, but he hasn’t had anything to drink that day. I have attached an image of the line. Before, Arvo and Devon were in the sauna, so there was no drinking involved. I just want to check if this was intentional or a small error.

Thanks again for all your work on this project—I’m really looking forward to future updates!

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I need my Klaus

Life changing vn 🙏 I have a few questions tho. Is it possible for saves to persist between updates while on mobile?

If so, how?

OH! And will Travis ever be available as an interactive character? You can't just bait us with a cuddly, energetic little tanuki and not let us befriend him!

im pretty sure the dev once said that travis is the token straight friend

just download the new APK after an update, saves should transfer over

Was wondering, do you ever plan on making a sequel, or even continue updating after the full release? Also wondering if your data restart after every update, which if it does is fine anyways but still wondering?

Awesome VN by the way, one of my favorites of all time, right behind it/tied has to be Promises to Keep, this is an amazing art styles and such a cute vibe! Very excited for upcoming updates

Your progress transfers after updating

Can someone help me out here. Who these next three Photos are with? Just Bjørn or some other characters. Also, the 7th Illustrations (from the Arvo's camera) is who? 

We can assume that those photos either are from a scene not out yet or don't exist, but:

Top photo is Klaus, as bottom photo is Travis.

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What is Klaus' orientation? I feel like it's Botany but I'm not sure.

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It always feels like an Undertale-esque playthrough every time I play. I have to choose who to help, but it leaves the other characters to fall apart when the player isn't there. Sometimes I question how I can replay the same paths and know I either hurt, help, or get Arvo hurt instead. Then having to leave everyone else behind with the knowledge I can't change their outcomes for the path I've chosen. It's a bit unfair, isn't it?

The player has the knowledge of how it all ends, but none of the characters remember what the player has done

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Woah— This is some deep thinking.

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Why isn't this picture in the gallery? 

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No idea why it wasn't. I'll add it with the next build!

Thanks, that's a relief to hear. Also, will the awaited illustration from this update that y'all have mentioned come in the next update

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I think we need a prequel for Mikko and Arvo (us).

Is today Devon’s birthday? I thought I saw that somewhere.

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I absolutely adore this visual novel! After it's done, will there ever be a sequel/continuation of this whole story, I absolutely love the characters and I'd miss them so much if they end so soon... I think they deserve their own animated series too!! It's amazing, really! 💘

Rune way too relatable fr fr

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When we're with Rune and we listen to the song by Boards of Canada, is that a real song? And if it is, where can I find it and listen to it? What's its name?

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just search in youtube: Patricia Taxxon Magic number

Btw it's based on a few songs by Boars of Canada I think? it sounds familiar to Olson and Wildlife Analysis imo

I see, thanks!

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//SPOILERS PROBABLY//

I might be writing an essay (Yeah I was)

Holy hell. I went to adult itch games just to get off, and what I came across was infinitely more. So I recently turned 18 🥳, waiting to be shipped off to college at the start of the next school year, and ffffuck this visual novel hit too damn close to home. In a good way. The writing was impeccable, the music complemented it so well. This was the first visual novel I've read but goddamn it was well done.

As a certified "adult", I've felt aimless. I'm all grown up, why don't I have  answers? Why am I so endlessly confused in every situation? What happened? Am I just immature? I feel like a 12 year-old in an 18 year-old body, thrown head first into a life I'm not ready to live. Why don't I know what's right? 

"We're ships at sea, drifting in all directions"

Damn. I'm a naive bitch, but I feel like this visual novel finally hammered it into my thick skull that everyone of every age is just pretending to know how to live. I don't know, that's my takeaway. That's definitely quite scary, but at least it means we're all in the same boat.

 I've gone down three of the pathways as of writing this: Lake, Torulf, and Rune.

I started down the route of Lake. It was probably a nice introduction to the game. Cozy, intimate, wholesome. Most of the paths you can go down are, but Lakes I feel was relatively light on the whole putting your heart through a paper shredder ordeal. I guess I can kind of relate to their struggle, being a "hopeless romantic". I've never had a "real relationship"; time and time again the other guy loses interest in me and I'm just left to stuff my feelings in a box and move on. There was a lot of truth to the comparison between the fantastical models we make of others and reality of who people are, but it didn't have me in tears. Lake was my fav though, cute af.

Next I went with Torulf. I didn't really like him in Lakes path, but he grew on me for a while. "Waiter, waiter more intimacy please!" Things definitely moved fast, but uh, being the horny bastard I am I never chose to slow down or call it quits. Then that traumatic fucking sequence hit. That shit had my heart racing, breath quickening. I was actually panicked. Of course, I the reader was never in danger; I was actively choosing to put my walls down and feel what this novel put in front of me. I'm glad I did, it made the story so much more impactful, but DAYUM. I've never had a boner disappear so fast. I actually felt guilty for enjoying the previous "events" with Torulf. I think this experience single-handedly convinced me not to ever sleep around, that's just not the life I want for myself. So uh, fuck you Torulf, and fuck you Dawn Chorus for making me feel all these things. 

I guess its nice to feel bad things in moderation every once in a while, I kind of enjoyed it in a weird way.

Rune, Rune, Rune. By far I related to him the most.  Back in middle school, even in the beginning of high school I prided myself on my accomplishments. I felt like they defined me. My talents defined me. It felt like all I had. After all, who am I but a coagulation of my achievements? Then, I lost all of it. My life fell apart. I fell into a depression that lasted years. I chose a very, very rigorous high school and I was not cut out for it. I could've transferred, but also, I couldn't. My pride was wounded enough. Funny, I guess I saw myself in Rune.  The mushroom trip sequence had me crying. The last time I cried was when my grandpa passed away. I shed two tears then, no more. I'm typically very reserved with my emotions, part of my "coping strategy" with depression was to just be happy or indifferent as my two expressed emotions, but that just lead to me being miserably empty most of the time. I'm sharing that cause I think it speaks to both how much I immersed myself in the game and how immersive the game was itself. Back to the mushroom trip, every question it asked I had asked myself at some point. It was surreal. 

"I though I had to justify my own existence"

That's me. I've been trying to justify my own existence. I don't have to either. That was profound. It was like looking in a mirror and seeing the inner workings of my brain. This is why I wrote this whole damn thing. I needed to hear that. I actually think this visual novel has changed how I perceive life. I can't even fathom how someone wrote this. Its incredible. 

"But I don't need a meaning. The existence is bliss."

Yesterday I finished Rune's path as it is now (I don't think its finished?). I took a cold shower for the first time. It was hard. It was nice though. I went for a run. I booked it as fast and as hard as I could, till my body gave out and I had to lay down. It was hard, and body hurt like hell, but it was nice. I got up and slowly, dragged my aching body back to my house. I was barely through the door when I collapsed right there in my dining room, the dizziness and pain overwhelming me. I may have passed out. I forgot where I was, what time it was. I was in so much pain. But I was comfortable lying there on the hardwood floor, outside of space and time, just momentarily.

I can't really put into words what I've gained from this game. I really just started writing and now I'm here. I had to write something. Now I look back on what I have written and its soooo long, oops. I probably could have just written about Rune, cause that's the character I connected with most, but oh well. I realize this puts a looot more emphasis on myself rather than the game than I initially planned. I guess I'll just end this here, although I most definitely could write more.

I'd like to thank the creators of Dawn Chorus. I hope what I've gained is somewhat decipherable from my ramblings, but if not, I guess I mostly wrote this for myself anyways. This is an incredibly talented project, unlike anything I've ever experienced. Its been an absolute rollercoaster of emotions, a homage to the human experience, told through furry animal creatures.

tldr: This visual novel is fire🔥🔥🔥

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💜
Nothing makes me happier than hearing it's helped someone.

This is a literal book report lmao (tbh tho it would probably get an A+ [from my English teacher at least lol]

yall is the any TW fer the new devon heavy stuff etc im kinda mentally like     in the pit rn so  this vn is fire tho glad i bugged in relatively early

I love this vn so much it amazes me over and over I did wanna just say that for rune his shirtless sprite has his left nipple (his left not ours) is like jagged I just wanted to make sure you guys knew! Keep up the beautiful work!!!!

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I litteraly wanted to cry with mikko route i feel so bad for him and wish i could help him. :'<

I absolutely adore and love Jørgen, i love how dominant but shy he is, id do anything for this boy i wish I could help him ima cry dude yall did amazing

have any of the characters canonically seen spermageddon

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Dude, why

I'm curious

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Devon route and Rune route make my heart like a fkn sht right now. They're literally made for each other ❤️😭

It means the story is too fkn good!!! 😭😭🙏

I love to torture my heart with their stories 😭❤️

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I love this so much! This was fun to read, can't wait for Lake's update! (Whenever that shall be, I don't mind waiting.) They are amazing!

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I only read this vn because of lake, he so cute

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I love Jørgen, I wish there was more to the end (I just didn't like seeing it end) (more probably will be added seeing that it made an auto save)

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Jørgen's update will be the next one I'll be working on after Torulf! 

Im happy to hear that

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