Hello, I am not completely sure where to mention an error in the text, so i will do it here for the time being (if there is a better place let me know).
In day 1, when you go to the janitor to ask about your key card, one of the lines that I can assume is said by the janitor has the player's name as the heading instead.
The line in question is: "Your name and room number, please?"
Which is then followed up on by the player responding with name and room number.
After playing the demo, I have to say that in all measures, this is an outstanding VN. The art is downright stunning and characters are hardly archetypal, with unique and engaging stories for every single one. Not only that, but over the course of the demo, though presently it's rather short, there are already enough spurs of intrigue and activities to get to know the cast better to keep you entertained for hours, not to mention the many paths already present.
It is also expertly written and directed, driving a compelling story that gives complete liberty to the player, without feeling forced at any point. It even finds chances to show off the amazing art by bringing several beautiful set pieces into the story, improving upon the already exhilarating and emotional journey on which we are just beginning.
Overall, this is an outstanding work, in which I am wholly enthralled, and am so excited to see develop in future. I rarely write reviews but I felt this is a due exception, and I think everyone should give this a shot at least once.
Quick question, how do I play these games on iPhone? Sorry this isn’t entirely specific to this game but I want to try this one and some others out but can’t open the iOS app files or dmg files and can’t find a fix that doesn’t need a computer (my computer is dead at the moment). Any help would be super appreciated:3
Hey. Will the side story with Rune and Devon be released here? I think i remember someone saying on Twitter that it would, but that was like one or two months ago.
Yes, but only once I have a final build. The one available for patrons now is a preview build with placeholder backgrounds and no illustrations, I'm waiting for these assets.
Hey wanted to know something. When i check the information it say updated 13h ago it it a real update or a glitch and also if it is a real update which character is the update for
I'm gonna need a second to bawl my eyes out about that there isn't a continuation for Lake after day 2. I'm not sure this is where it ends, but I sure as hell hope not
Hello again what about Devon sorry I don't mean to be a broken record but seriously I really miss him and want to know what to do with the main character
Stayed for the atmospheric storytelling, engaging character connections, dreamy music, incredible art and designs, immersive events, and the satisfying feeling of enjoying a project made with passion.
Oh, and the hot tiger. I love the hot tiger.
If you're reading this because you don't know if you should try it out, I made an account just to say this. That's how you know it's good. 10/10
That very first lockerroom scene with Rune on the first day just really gets me. My heart was beating so hard and i got lightheaded and couldnt calm myself for a solid 10 minutes. I could feel my heart beating through my chest
Hey, I noticed some typos in the first day. I chose to sit with lake and after when you talk to miko there is a { left in the text. Then later on if you go with lake to talk to the receptionist, there's this one bit where you end up asking yourself for your name and room number. I just wanted you guys to know! I love this VN so much, and some of the bits from it actually lead me to coming out to my parents. Thank you so much for this game!
I have a character idea if you wana intruduse a new one. If there are mixed breed's then maby a shy timid liger idk and it can maby be non-binary. Ther clothing would be bagy but elegant. Ther fur could look ruf but it is actually kinda smooth. Idk it's just an idea that popd in to my head while playing the game.
I love this GAME!!!! It's such a vibe and i end up listening to the music. There will be a day 3 rite? Sorry I just love the game and i realy want day 3 Mikka
if you choose to look for the key and before that (I think?) sat with lake and talked to lake then after you go to the front desk you will go outside by yourself and then you will get it, (sorry if this is vage)
I LOVE THIS GAME!!! It's just SOOO perfect!! It will sounds strange but, in a way, this game made me think about moving to Norway or Sweden. And now, every day I refresh the page and see if there is a new update. What i'm trying to say is - YOU ARE THE BEST <3 (Rune and Jorgen are my favorites btw :3)
Come to fucking Sweden man. Especially in winter season. Maybe not Stockholm in winter because I rain's more then snow's then. Come to Stockholm in mars or november then there will be more snow. Otherwise I recommend more up in Sweden. Or maby in summer time. or just don't come here at al it's your choice
I'm missing one illustration from the new update. I don't know if it's from Jørgen or from Torulf. It's from the last row on the page with one of Jørgens illustrations
Do you think you can show how much of each route is done like that bar graph you had before? I know everything is end of day 2 right now, but it was super convenient for picking which route to do :D
Choose to sit with Lake, (just whatever on the Jorgen scene), then talk to Rune. When he and the MC meet, try finding the key. Pick whatever at the next choices, then he will give the MC his coat. Thats the first illustration.
The other one is on Jorgen's route, maybe i will come back and tell ya how to get it later, im on a rush rn lol.
OMG this game reminds me so much of when I studied in Sweden, but you could add some characthers from warmer countries too ;) I loved this game, when it will be finished?
Probably just a minor bugfix or slight compatibility change, otherwise it would have changed to 0.27. Means the devs are alive and probably getting ready to drop the next update, if anything!
The intro up to the title screen got reworked a bit, hopefully to its final version, and there were some minor bugfixes. No new content in this update, sadly :c
is it bad that i fall inlove with Devon? Because okay hear me out i know that he's their Coach and the age gap and all but coooooommmme ooooooon. Either way i'm still shipping the MC and Devon and my ship will sail.
age gap doesnt matter in this context as everyone is in college anyway i think (its been a while since i last played but i think they indeed are in college)
I mean the way Devon has been written is okay, i have no problems about that, one of the best routes i'd say.
But the important part there in what you said is "CAN BE". Not always, not a rule and not the route that this novel attempts to go. For me if Devon was a major teacher for MC id see it as taboo of power dinamic, but power dynamic only by age gap? meh
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Hello, I am not completely sure where to mention an error in the text, so i will do it here for the time being (if there is a better place let me know).
In day 1, when you go to the janitor to ask about your key card, one of the lines that I can assume is said by the janitor has the player's name as the heading instead.
The line in question is: "Your name and room number, please?"
Which is then followed up on by the player responding with name and room number.
why is invalid ?
It said the same thing to me, could be a bug.
Which of the files is that? The April build or v0.26?
Is the com.dawnchorus.dawnchorus-release-0.26.3.apk
the April 2nd one
After playing the demo, I have to say that in all measures, this is an outstanding VN. The art is downright stunning and characters are hardly archetypal, with unique and engaging stories for every single one. Not only that, but over the course of the demo, though presently it's rather short, there are already enough spurs of intrigue and activities to get to know the cast better to keep you entertained for hours, not to mention the many paths already present.
It is also expertly written and directed, driving a compelling story that gives complete liberty to the player, without feeling forced at any point. It even finds chances to show off the amazing art by bringing several beautiful set pieces into the story, improving upon the already exhilarating and emotional journey on which we are just beginning.
Overall, this is an outstanding work, in which I am wholly enthralled, and am so excited to see develop in future. I rarely write reviews but I felt this is a due exception, and I think everyone should give this a shot at least once.
Yours truly,
E.T. Elba
DAMN
IT'S 4 AM AND HERE I AM LOSING MY SHIT
Which route? Lol.
Why it said updated i day ago on the more information tab? Was that for patreon?
God, I adore Lake so much, I just can't he's so cute, the best boy of the novella, give him to me please
i made fanart of travis (he's my favorite character!
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gamer!!!1!!!1
Who tf is that dude next to MC in the new screen shot cuz I can't figure it out for the life of me
might be jorgen
that's what I was thinking but i don't think it's him cause it's not wearing a poncho which is what got me confused
No it actually is Jorgen ! It's from his latest route update
Ty for clearing that up for us cuz that shit made my brain hurt trying to figure who tf that was
yea i figured because only 2 characters wears glasses and mikko has a longer tail so i knew it was jorgen.
Quick question, how do I play these games on iPhone? Sorry this isn’t entirely specific to this game but I want to try this one and some others out but can’t open the iOS app files or dmg files and can’t find a fix that doesn’t need a computer (my computer is dead at the moment). Any help would be super appreciated:3
unfortunately I dont think you can :(
dang.. well thanks for the feedback, anyway :3
Guess I’ll settle for any games I can play in browser
bro pls say travis has a route 😥😥😥
😔
Lol riiiip
travis has a route in our heart😌
Hey. Will the side story with Rune and Devon be released here? I think i remember someone saying on Twitter that it would, but that was like one or two months ago.
Yes, but only once I have a final build. The one available for patrons now is a preview build with placeholder backgrounds and no illustrations, I'm waiting for these assets.
Oh, okay.
Hey wanted to know something. When i check the information it say updated 13h ago it it a real update or a glitch and also if it is a real update which character is the update for
The page got updated, not the visual novel itself
I'm gonna need a second to bawl my eyes out about that there isn't a continuation for Lake after day 2. I'm not sure this is where it ends, but I sure as hell hope not
It isnt. They are just taking a whille with the update taht will include part of day 3 for every route
The update that includes the start of Day 2 is already finished, for now it's available for patrons and I'll upload it here on 25.04.
Hello again what about Devon sorry I don't mean to be a broken record but seriously I really miss him and want to know what to do with the main character
The next update I'm working on will feature new content for Devon, Bjorn and Torulf, so all the remaining main characters c:
Came for the hot tiger.
Stayed for the atmospheric storytelling, engaging character connections, dreamy music, incredible art and designs, immersive events, and the satisfying feeling of enjoying a project made with passion.
Oh, and the hot tiger. I love the hot tiger.
If you're reading this because you don't know if you should try it out, I made an account just to say this. That's how you know it's good.
10/10
I also made an account for this lol
Hey I got an error during the game, here's a copy paste ! Loved new update btw ♥
"I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "game/day2_16_end.rpy", line 128, in <module>
NameError: name 'torulf_doubt' is not defined
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "day2_16_end.rpyc", line 128, in script
File "renpy/ast.py", line 1898, in execute
if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
File "renpy/python.py", line 2276, in py_eval
return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
File "renpy/python.py", line 2269, in py_eval_bytecode
return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
File "game/day2_16_end.rpy", line 128, in <module>
NameError: name 'torulf_doubt' is not defined
Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.11.2266
Dawn Chorus 0.26.3
Sat Mar 25 13:01:25 2023"
I like these, but I have to ask you to post them in one thread, not to have too many off-topic ones. Thank you!
Oki i will keep that in mind😸
Just finished with Bjorn route and it's amazing can't wait for day 3
Yes! Another Bjorn liker to the fam
That very first lockerroom scene with Rune on the first day just really gets me. My heart was beating so hard and i got lightheaded and couldnt calm myself for a solid 10 minutes. I could feel my heart beating through my chest
Hey, I noticed some typos in the first day. I chose to sit with lake and after when you talk to miko there is a { left in the text. Then later on if you go with lake to talk to the receptionist, there's this one bit where you end up asking yourself for your name and room number. I just wanted you guys to know! I love this VN so much, and some of the bits from it actually lead me to coming out to my parents. Thank you so much for this game!
I have a character idea if you wana intruduse a new one. If there are mixed breed's then maby a shy timid liger idk and it can maby be non-binary. Ther clothing would be bagy but elegant. Ther fur could look ruf but it is actually kinda smooth. Idk it's just an idea that popd in to my head while playing the game.
how do you get the first scene in the gallery?
I love this one to
it's Boba tea if you want to know what inside the cup
idk why i post it here but i like that the main character also like's taking photos of things
Nice photos!
Thank you😸
Love this
thx for correcting my typo :)
I love this GAME!!!! It's such a vibe and i end up listening to the music. There will be a day 3 rite? Sorry I just love the game and i realy want day 3 Mikka
Stupid question here, how do I get the first photo in the gallery
if you choose to look for the key and before that (I think?) sat with lake and talked to lake then after you go to the front desk you will go outside by yourself and then you will get it, (sorry if this is vage)
I LOVE THIS GAME!!! It's just SOOO perfect!! It will sounds strange but, in a way, this game made me think about moving to Norway or Sweden. And now, every day I refresh the page and see if there is a new update. What i'm trying to say is - YOU ARE THE BEST <3 (Rune and Jorgen are my favorites btw :3)
Come to fucking Sweden man. Especially in winter season. Maybe not Stockholm in winter because I rain's more then snow's then. Come to Stockholm in mars or november then there will be more snow. Otherwise I recommend more up in Sweden. Or maby in summer time. or just don't come here at al it's your choice
Same, I thought of the possibility. I ended up moving to Switzerland though, lol.
Lake is so adorable, when he talked about his fear of letting the player down made me want to hug him :}
I just felt so bad for him
i would die for jørgen without question.....and bjørn....and mikko and lake etc etc
are they queer?
They all like men and you play as a male character, so yes.
are there any sex scenes?
There are four
do you happed to know the paths to any of them?
Three are on Torulf's route, just on the main path, one on Bjorn's route, if you decide to drink with him at the end of Day 2
I'm missing one illustration from the new update. I don't know if it's from Jørgen or from Torulf. It's from the last row on the page with one of Jørgens illustrations
mikko my beloved
Do you think you can show how much of each route is done like that bar graph you had before? I know everything is end of day 2 right now, but it was super convenient for picking which route to do :D
rune gives me a nosebleed in the best kind of way, im excited to see more
Anyone know how to get the 2nd illustration on the 1st page and the 4th illustration on the 2nd page? Thank you!
Choose to sit with Lake, (just whatever on the Jorgen scene), then talk to Rune. When he and the MC meet, try finding the key. Pick whatever at the next choices, then he will give the MC his coat. Thats the first illustration.
The other one is on Jorgen's route, maybe i will come back and tell ya how to get it later, im on a rush rn lol.
OMG this game reminds me so much of when I studied in Sweden, but you could add some characthers from warmer countries too ;) I loved this game, when it will be finished?
Holup why did I just get an email from itch saying that there was an update to the VN What exactly changed from 0.26.2 to 0.26.3
Probably just a minor bugfix or slight compatibility change, otherwise it would have changed to 0.27. Means the devs are alive and probably getting ready to drop the next update, if anything!
The intro up to the title screen got reworked a bit, hopefully to its final version, and there were some minor bugfixes. No new content in this update, sadly :c
Ah thank you for clearing that up for me I was majorly confused
So will there be any new content in the next update?
is it bad that i fall inlove with Devon? Because okay hear me out i know that he's their Coach and the age gap and all but coooooommmme ooooooon. Either way i'm still shipping the MC and Devon and my ship will sail.
age gap doesnt matter in this context as everyone is in college anyway i think (its been a while since i last played but i think they indeed are in college)
I mean the way Devon has been written is okay, i have no problems about that, one of the best routes i'd say.
But the important part there in what you said is "CAN BE". Not always, not a rule and not the route that this novel attempts to go. For me if Devon was a major teacher for MC id see it as taboo of power dinamic, but power dynamic only by age gap? meh
again CAN happen is not a rule of happening