Small update on development, side story


Hi all, Keo here! 

It's been a while since the last update, so I thought I could tell you what's been happening over at Dawn Chorus team. With Day 2 done, I took some time off from writing updates to focus on some other things around the VN: foremost the side story I had in plans, but also some further Day 1 reworks, including writing the damned bus scene anew and refining my ideas for routes and scenes before I go forward with writing the rest of the VN.


Now, the writing for the side story is all done, and this weekend I've released a sneak peek build for our patrons: https://www.patreon.com/posts/all-lonely-v0-5-78558076. Called All The Lonely People, t's a completely standalone, self-contained VN featuring Rune and Devon, showing their first encounter and exploring them in more depth. It's about ~16k words long, so around one and a half to double the length of our usual Dawn Chorus update. It doesn't feature the illustrations yet - these are commissioned and we're waiting for them until we do a proper release. So, for now, the side story will remain a sneak peek before the v1.0 build. The full VN will be first released on Patreon, and then here a month later, as with Dawn Chorus updates. Unfortunately I don't have an estimate for when they'll be done - should be within a few months.


I took some time to go through Day 1 and fix some inconsistencies and writing issues - there isn't a lot of changes, apart from a largely rewritten intro section, but it should read nicer now. The build with these changes was uploaded about two weeks ago. Sometime soon I also may stealthily upload a build that'll feature some very minor changes to the routes, to reflect the new Ideas I got during this last month.


So, what now? I'm back to writing Dawn Chorus, starting Day 3. The next update will feature new content for multiple routes, I hope to have it ready soon!

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I'm so excited!!!!! also does anyone know when it's going to be released and for what routes it'll have be continued 

So excited, remember to take care of yourself! We all appreciate what you do, this story is beautiful.

I was wondering, will those updates for multiple routes be the whole third day or a part of it only?

following the pattern, its usually in part

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Oooooo can't wait, though this is for patreon correct???

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For now - yes, but it'll be released publicly as a standalone VN too

Do you mean the side story?

i'm super excited! hope you could rest a bit and hope you have a lovely day~~